Bad News Email

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To: xxx@gmail.com

Subject: My IUPUI Class Proposal Was Not Selected

 

Hello Mr. Jackson:

 

My proposal was not selected during the class presentation and voting process that occured on February 5, 2019.

 

During this voting day, each of my 24 classmates presented a proposal and then voted to select 4, of which mine was not selected.

 

Thank you for your time and desire to work with myself and my peers. Although my proposal was not selected, there are many alternatives that you can investigate to continue conducting research on your specific challenge.

 

Benefits of Presented IUPUI Proposal:

• Reach out to Deborah Oesch-Minor to discuss your challenge and the possibility of working with a team of IUPUI students again next semester.

• Working class of 24 IUPUI students are now familiar with Jacksons Realty and Builders Company.

• Communicated 16 of your Indianapolis locations to these specific students.

 

I have attached the presentation that was given on February 5, 2019 below so that you may understand what was proposed to my class. If you have any further questions or would like to discuss this presentation, you may contact me at this email address. Thank you for formally introducing your company to me and I hope to discuss your business more in person sometime soon.

 

Thank you for your time,

 

Lillianna Shields

 

Presented Proposal: https://view.genial.ly/5c5329011ef86d73dd8f9e93/writing-project-1

Deborah Oesch-Minor email: djoeschm@iupui.edu